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Jumat, 21 Maret 2014

WRITING III: Assigment 1

Post here the draft of your argument text including the title and the ideas (reasons of your argument). Deadline: March 24, monday midnight.

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  1. Title : Time is Money

    The Ideas :
    1. Husni Yohan (A1D3 09 026)
    1.1. Time Is Money, it just a statement from people who think money is important.
    1.2. Money can't change the Time, that because time will never stop and will continue to spin.
    1.3. Money can change our life, but not our time.

    2. Harudin Bin La Aha (A1D3 09 021)
    2.1. The time can be able more important in the life
    2.2. Money Can be able change our life
    2.3. Money cannot change of time.

    3. Zelliyasmin Safiah (A1D3 09 075)
    3.1. I disagree with this statement because time can not be value as money. but what we do at time that can be value as money

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  3. Assalamualaikum Mam, This is our writing task about Argument.
    My name is Nur Walman Julianti ( A1D4 12 O20) and my partner
    Yulius Pangiman (A1D4 12 027)

    Title : CIGARETTE CAN KILL YOU!

    The ideas :
    1. Cigarette can harm themselves and others. Because, it can reduce the economy in family. It caused the addict have to spend a lot of money every day to meet the desire of smoking and Smokers are usually identical to those dirty, bad breath, etc. making it less convenient in view.
    And can harm to others. because, people who do not smoke or commonly referred to as passive smokers who are near with the addicted to cigarettes ..indirectly ,would inhale the smoke from the addict. this will cause a variety of diseases.

    2.Cigarettes can cause Health disorders because smoking can cause a variety of diseases that are very dangerous. such as lung cancer. In cigarette contains a lot of chemicals that are highly toxic / harmful to our health. One of which is nicotine, which causes narrowing of the blood vessels and lead to lung cancer for cigarette addicts.

    Thankyou Mam.

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    1. I agree with you argument , I think the title is very good

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    2. I really agree with your argument.. and in my opinion, some of people know that is exactly but never apply in their life. they just feel comfortable with sensation of cigarette such us make they unstress, calm thinking, and etc.

      i think just it my argument...

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  4. ASSIGNMENT WRITING 3

    “ ARGUMENTATIVE TEXT ”



    CREATED BY :
     RISAL A1D412016
     FATHULLAH NURUSSALAM A1D412043


    TEACHER TRAINING AND EDUCATIONAL FACULTY
    ENGLISH EXTENSION PROGRAM
    HALUOLEO UNIVERSITY
    2013



    PART TIME JOB HAS NEGATIVE IMPACT TO STUDENTS
    To get into to college should cost much money : therefore , lots of students would look for a part time job for helping to share the burden of their parents and other students who want to have a part time job are mostly because they want to get some social experinces.
    A part time job can also effect a student’s studies negatively if it causes the child to be sleep-deprived. It can be difficult to concentrate in school if you tired. If working the job make you stay up later than is optimal, you might be tired when you go to school. Then you might not learn as much and this can affect your grades or achievement in the school.
    To keep up the health is important but difficult to the students who have to work after school to some reasons. First , the students be who have to work after school might have to stay up to do their home work or reports ; second , they might use their rest time to work ; third , their immunity against disease might decrease. Therefore , it could be difficult for them to keep their health.
    To focus on studying is the duty of students; however, it is usually difficult to those students who have a part time job. Most of these students have less time to prepare and review lessons. Furthermore , they dont have the energy to study hard. Therefore , they usually do their study. No matter how many negative effects students having a part time job , if they have the right concept about their students and part time jobs, they could learn more than they can imagine.

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    1. i dont agree with you, because many positive impacts that can be given of the part time job itself, for example, students who work on part time job that can be independent, can better appreciate the meaning of time and money itself, so I think like that

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    2. I agree with egi irmawanti..

      As fas as I know, students who looking for part time job are have their reason themself. And in my opinion,there are some of reasons, such as:
      1. Student’s family background. Especially for poor students and continue their school in outside of their hometown, of course they have a choice to looking for a part time job. Because their parents can’t filling the requirements of that students.

      2. They would make an independent lifes. They should try to manage their time and life without parents who always near and guide them.

      3. Based on your opinion that students who looking for a part time job cant keep their health. I think it’s depend on student’s itself. They should find a job which can’t demanding their schedule in college. So, they will have time to take a rest.

      thank you, and please pardon me if I have mistake in my word... ^_^

      Hapus
  5. assalamualikum ....

    WRITING III

    "ARGUMENT"

    CREATED BY :
    1. EGI IRMAWANTI PUHID (A1D412028)
    2. EPTI DAMAYANTI ( A1D412030)

    FACEBOOK ACCOUNT

    POSITIVE ARGUMENT :

    facebook account is better than the other social media or other online tools such as Twitter, Path, Skype, and others for example video call. And in addition it also facebook is easier to understand and be understood in its users so it is not uncommon facebook user continues to grow every year and then facebook it has an attractive appearance and unique appearance compared to other social media.
    facebook and also have the free services so we can access it for free.

    thank you :)

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    1. assalamualaikumm...

      I have a different idea with your argument that we can access facebook free. i think it isn't just facebook which can free access. but, twitter can too.
      of course, if you want to access or make an account of facebook and twitter via mobile phone, your phone should have pulse firstly to online.

      next, i would ask you about why you said that facebook has an attractive and unique appearance compared with other social media? could you explain specifically about it...?

      thank you.... ^_^

      Hapus
    2. waalaikumsalam :)
      thank you for your argument :) oke i will explain :)

      why I say free, because there is one service that is 0.facebook, where we can access it through 0.facebook it is a free service in provided by facebook so if we play it will not be exposed at any cost :) so this different about facebook with other social media.

      and also why I say facebook has a unique and attractive , because facebook is always changing the zoom to get a better look attractive so that users did not get bored, for example on message services there are emotions that I think is funny and very unique.

      thank you

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    3. Assalamu`alaikum, Good afternoon

      Yes, its true that social media like facebook has benefits that you describe, but I disagree about your opinion which says that facebook better than other social media. You can`t say like that, because every social media has adventages and disadvantages. You know social media like blackberry messenger such as facebook. In blackberry messenger we can update status, post photos and video, send music and one more thing, people can get faster information through blackberry messenger (BBM)

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  6. Assalamualaikum Wr. Wb...

    This is our assignment 1 of WRITING 3 about argumentative text.

    Created by:
    1. RATIH PRIHATINI (A1 D4 12 018)
    2. NURDIANA (A1 D4 12 011)


    "ONLINE SHOP IS THE BENEFIT WAY TO SHOP"

    Online shopping is the act of purchasing goods trough using an internet. The reasons why online shopping is benefit for us to shop, because:

    1. It will save our time (time effective)
    The purchasers will unnecessary waste their time to walking around on the market or Mall only in search of goods that they want to buy. Sometimes for busy’s people or housewife who can’t leave their activity, they can do their purchasing or shopping trough internet.

    2. Cost effective
    Like local stores, sometimes online shopping offer discount for available goods too. In addition, online stores in certain time give promotion for new goods which have get launching.

    3. The purchasers can compare the prices in different online store
    It will make purchasers get benefit before they do their purchasing. They can compare online store which has lower prices but still has good product. Besides that, in online shopping there are information, delivery timing, and availability of the goods.

    4. There is no crowds and queues
    One of the benefit of shopping over the internet is the purchasers will never feel bustle because stand in crowd and do queue to pay the good’s cost. But, a little different with shopping in local stores, the purchaser should receive the order before transferred their money. It is for avoid the deception act.

    Thank you, mam....

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    Balasan
    1. i agree with you argument miss ratih :)

      thank you :)

      Hapus
    2. but online shop can happen fraud, we have sent our money but the goods are not delivered
      Risal
      A1D412016

      Hapus
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  9. ARGUMENT
    • MISNAWATI (A1D4 12 026)
    • ANDI ASMIATI ALI (A1D4 12 046)

    COSMETIC


     The title : Cosmetic can make a user become beautiful and handsome
    Especially for a woman

    Cosmetic is beautiful tools suddenly we using every day especially for a woman. Cosmetic give a function to all of you especially for a woman because,
    1. Cosmetic can make your beautiful if you using it.
    2. Cosmetic can you become young back again.
    3. Cosmetic can make your face become white smooth.
    4. Cosmetic can make your face become boisterous.
    5. Cosmetic can to elimination the black flak to your face.
    6. Cosmetic can protecting you husk from ray ultraviolet.
    7. And the last cosmetic can preventing oily face.
    And I think for all a people to needed a cosmetic because it is to needed.

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    Balasan
    1. I'm Ika Endang Siti Maryati..
      I disagree with your argument. Because this time, a lot of cosmetic that contain harmful chemicals and so dangerous for our skins.
      thank you...

      Hapus
  10. Assalamu`alaikum and good afternoon..

    Name: Putri Parha Raehana (A1D413019)
    Name: Yaumil Heiria (A1D412029)

    Tittle: Water have feeling like human

    1. Water can hear and give expression.
    When we speak, the water can listen to what we say, and by saying that the water can express.

    2. Water can read.
    If a paper we are confronted to the water in a bottle, the water can capture the text message or digest.

    3. Water can understand the message.
    If we say or give a message to the water in a bottle or container, water can understand the message that we mean.

    4. All of water in the world are equal.
    Derived from the same source, just different place.

    5. Water have power
    Without water, human can died.

    Thank you :)

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    Balasan
    1. I have a little confused with your argument point 3.... can you explain it more specific?

      thank you....^_^

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    2. Ok I will explain about my argument point 3 :)

      As research conducted by Dr. Masaru Em oto from Yokohama University researching about water around the world, and yes concluded that water can store and understand the message submitted. If you do not understand, please see on my facebook that I have posted and to be more convincing and you can understand my argument. :) please open the link http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=wA1nsZMDMiw

      Thank you, I hope you can understand :)

      Hapus
  11. NAME: YOHANA SALEH A1D412 034

    THE POSITIVE IMPACT OF WESTERN SONG

    All people in the world pretty sure like listening to music, especially young generation. Western song is the one of example. Many young generation consider that western song is very cool.
    When we listening about western song, we can improve vocabulary and pronunciation.
    If we listen the singer singing and there’s a new word which we never hear before that’s can add a new vocabulary.
    And when we listen the singer mention the word so we can know the true pronunciation.

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    Balasan
    1. Yes, I agree with your argument. why I say that, because I ever try it and i am success in improve my vocabulary and pronunciation.

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  12. NAME: YULIANA A1D412012
    SUFIANTI A1D412004
    ~COSMETICS CAN MAKE
    NOT COMFORTABLE ~

    Most of the women said that using cosmetics they can look pretty. But some are not agree with the statement. Here are a few reasons that make us do not agree as follows:

    1. Making users into dependence
    The reason: when a person is not wearing cosmetics she will feel confident with her appearance.
    2. makes users can not adapt to the environment in which it is located, the reason:
    When users are in a place where the temperature is hotter than normal it will feel anxious, for example, would be afraid to be exposed to sunlight.
    3. Cosmetics can cause skin cancer, the reason: someone who overuse of cosmetics can be affected by skin cancer. For example: the use of whitening creams, whitening creams usually contain as many chemicals.

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  13. NAME : YEYEN MUFLIHAN A1D412017
    SINTHA PEBRIANI PATARRU A1D412022
    WRITING III ASSIGNMENT
    The negative impact of the use of gadgets for students
    Technological development cannot be separated from humans, especially gadgets. The gadget is now one of the communication tools used everyday human.
    The use of gadgets can have a negative impact on students because, students cannot think creatively and do not always use their brains to think so as to make them even weaker and the brain will also lead students hung and always rely on gadgets. In addition students will also learn to forget time, causing school performance will decline as well as the presence of children also gadgets will simply open negative information such as sex. Use gadgets will also lead to a lack of interaction and environment around it.





















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  14. (Listening is first, Speaking is second to learn English) by Safrin/A1D412040, Yusrin Saeda/A1D308123.
    The Idea :
    1. The nature of English is a foreign language for Indonesian people;
    2. We can not speak using a language if we have no idea about the language;
    3. Listening effectively will improve our speaking skill.
    Actually, when we speak, we are actively expressing our own idea, but, for many Indonesian people, which as the beginner in learn English; could we try to let out our idea in sounds through our mouth as easy as the idea itself by using that language?
    As well as we know, English is international language and as a foreign language for Indonesian people, it becomes a special thing to learn. But, with its status as a foreign language, to make a sound or speak using English is not an easy thing. Yes, of course we can learn it. But, how do we can learn it well? According to some comprehension-based language teaching proposals, which believe that comprehension abilities precede productive skills in learning a language, and teaching of speaking should be delayed until comprehension skills are established.
    Listening, it is such a good way to learn English. Listening is a comprehension skill. And every day we’ve listen in order to learn and to retain some information. In order to learn English, the information that we’ve got by listening, such vocabulary, pronunciation, and articulation, these all information will be used as the knowledge to improve our speaking development in that language. So, this is why listening is first and speaking is second could be an effective way to learn English.

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  15. Name: Ika Endang Siti Maryati (A1D412039)
    Wd. Siti Hariani (A1D412015)

    TEENAGERS CAN’T ACCESS INTERNET
    If teenagers access internet, they can:
    1. Download pornographic picture and video
    2. Forget to study
    3. Easy to negative influence

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  17. Assalamualaikum wr.wb :)

    NAME : INTAN PUTRIANI YUSUF (A1D4 12 010)

    "THE TEENS AND BUSSINES"

    I’m so excited with this amazing topic. Since I was a teenager who is very interested in the business world. Young age is not a barrier to doing business and making money themselves. As the age of a teenager is a time filled with the spirit, the first step towards success in the future is the accuracy in choosing the road of life.
    Many people succeed and many fail, every person has the success factors of each, but there are major points in achieving that success. One of which you can do at this young age is to develop an online business networks or so-called online business. The path taken by many college kids and some even still attending high school. And not a few of them succeed. The essential spirit of entrepreneurship. and I already feel it. The most important capital to start a business at a young age is confidence. You should have high confidence. If you have the high confidence do the things to achieve your goals. So that's your self-esteem that can illuminate your path to success. Never give up and always keep trying to get the best. Celebrate what you get, although not as you wish. But it is as hard as possible to achieve the best results.

    THANK YOU ^^

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  18. NEGATIVE IMPACT FROM WESTERNT CULTURE
    by Ahmadal Badawi (A1 D4 12 009) and Aljody Pahlevi (A1 D4 12 032)
    There are several reasons as to foreign cultures:
    1. LIFESTYLE FOREIGN CULTURE CAN UNDERMINE THE NATION.
    Lifestyle changes in Indonesia is very far from the values of Pancasila, for example the lack of teen fashion in today pose a negative value on the national culture.

    2. LOSS OF LOCAL CULTURE DUE TO THE INFLUENCE OF WESTERN CULTURE.
    Entry of western culture can eliminate the local culture example has many indigenous dances missing replaced with modern dance.

    3. TEENAGERS MORAL THE DESTRUCTION BECAUSE FREE SEX.
    Promiscuity can damage teenagers, for example, a lot of pregnancy outside of marriage and brought the age, the number of abortions and the number of cases of HIV / AIDS.

    4. SEX IS EVERYWHERE.
    At least the supervision of the government raises the number of prostitutes who became a place for everyone looking for fun make this attraction for teenagers to earn money faster due to the high economic era now.

    Thanks :D

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  19. Assignment writing 3

    DRUGS IS THAT SOOTHES

    Name : FERAWATI.HAMID ( A1D4 12 008 )
    Name : SARDIANA ( A1D4 12 035 )
    Name : SAMSUL RISAL BASRI ( A1D4 11 011 )

    Assalamu alaikum …..!!!

    Many people think negatively about drugs but the drug actually also have a positive impact for example:

    - When someone is having a problem, they use the drug as a sedative.

    - Drugs also can make confident

    -Become more powerful / stronger

    in the world of health many benefits of drugs is soothes for example:

    - Ecstasy mengurangikecemasan, relieve symptoms of Parkinson's
    - Cocaine as an anesthetic
    - One of the drugs of heroin painkillers
    - Marijuana is a cure for cancer, aids, skelarasis, glaucoma and epilepsy.

    that's what we can inform you that the drug also has benefits. thank warning should not be used excessive.

    Walaikum salam…!!!

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  20. NAME : MULTANG (A1D4 12 013)
    AMSAHIF (A1D4 12 044)


    LOVE IS HURT

    because :
    1.love make us crying or sad
    2. love make us jealous for somebody
    3. moreover love can kill us

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  21. assalamualaikum wr,wb

    this our assignment about " ARGUMENTATIVE TEXT"

    CREATED BY :

    KARTIKA (A1D412037)
    SARDIANI (A1D412002)

    THE IMPACT OF SMOKE

    for the people who are addicted to smoking will cause cancer and other diseanse. Because smoke contain many chemical for difficult addiction to guit using cigarettes because cigarette

    the reason :

    1. they really enjoy it when they are not able to withstand even thouhgh aware that his health was at stake for the pleasure

    2. they think smoke can be confident that they believe themselves to take certain

    3. they become addicted to nicotint without life feels empty become regular cigarette smoking in order to feel relaxed


    thank you mam

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    Balasan
    1. i agree with you argument , but so many people dont know about that

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  22. i agree with you,. it's good.

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  23. Assignment writing 3
    Name:Safrin
    No.Reg:A1D4 12 040
    Cristiano Renaldo Is The Bast Player Football All Time ( ANALYTICAL)

    Cristiano Ronaldo is a football player from Portugal countries. Famous when he defended the club Manchester United. In two thousand nine he moved to Spain to join the club Real Madrid. With Real Madrid, Cristiano Ronaldo has been getting a lot of titles to Real Madrid.
    There are three reason why Cristiano Ronaldo worth mentioning as a football player of all time:
    The reason is:
    1.Cristiano Ronaldo have extra ordinary skills, capable of confronting all players and scored.
    2.Cristiano Ronaldo has also a very fast pace.
    3.And he is supported by a solid team.
    Cristiano Ronaldo does deserve it all. He was the best all time. I Hope one day to meet him.

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  24. Name : Amsahif
    Reg.No : A1D4 12 044
    Reading Techniques
    Reading is a type of reading that prioritizes reading speed without having to leave the understanding of the content of the readings. Reading speed depends on the material and the purpose of reading and mastery of the content of the reader reading.

    Various speeds reading technique is divided into two, namely:
    A. Skimming
    Reading techniques skimming is a technique to search for key ideas or important things that exist in the literature. Examples: read encyclopedias, dictionaries, indexes, yellow pages, etc.
    Skimming can be done if:
    - Want to identify the topic of reading.
    - Want to do a refresher on what he had read.
    - Want to get a vital part of a reading without reading the whole.
    - Want to know the opinion of a person in general.
    B. Scanning
    Scanning speed reading technique is a technique to understand the information read from a reading.

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